http://bodylanguagevideos.com/videos-body-language-men-women/i-need-help-with-my-paper.htm bodylanguagevideos.com Wed, 12 May 2010 13:07:59 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.2.1 http://bodylanguagevideos.com/videos-body-language-men-women/i-need-help-with-my-paper.htm/comment-page-1#comment-1037 Karizma Wed, 10 Feb 2010 07:11:59 +0000 http://bodylanguagevideos.com/videos-body-language-men-women/i-need-help-with-my-paper.htm#comment-1037 1) "the west started questioning Islam and the Islamic society more than ever. 2) .People started to search (you have used capitals in the wrong places) for explanations of what caused (instead of causes) 3) The West started to question everything relating to Islamic culture. 4) on people from the Middle East (instead of Middle Eastern people) 5)not about the teachings of Islam (instead of teaching) 6) But individuals, (not-- But, individuals,) 7) Al-Quadia (proper arabic form) 8) no doubt that the laws Islam follows ( you shouldn't capitalize follows) 9) no doubt that the laws Islam follows could be strange to Westerners, such as Jihad or Holy War. (the way you phrased that sentence confuses me....try to rephrase whether in my way or maybe your own way) uuuummmmm..well that was the proofreading for the first paragraph, maybe someone else will do the next...hope this helps =]<br><b>References : </b><br> 1) "the west started questioning Islam and the Islamic society more than ever.
2) .People started to search (you have used capitals in the wrong places) for explanations of what caused (instead of causes)
3) The West started to question everything relating to Islamic culture.
4) on people from the Middle East (instead of Middle Eastern people)
5)not about the teachings of Islam (instead of teaching)
6) But individuals, (not– But, individuals,)
7) Al-Quadia (proper arabic form)
no doubt that the laws Islam follows ( you shouldn’t capitalize follows)
9) no doubt that the laws Islam follows could be strange to Westerners, such as Jihad or Holy War. (the way you phrased that sentence confuses me….try to rephrase whether in my way or maybe your own way)
uuuummmmm..well that was the proofreading for the first paragraph, maybe someone else will do the next…hope this helps =]
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