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		<title>By: ruth4526</title>
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		<description>Interesting, no change needed other than you have with whom Jack have spoken to , I thing it should read with whom Jack had spoken to.&lt;br&gt;&lt;b&gt;References : &lt;/b&gt;&lt;br&gt;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Interesting, no change needed other than you have with whom Jack have spoken to , I thing it should read with whom Jack had spoken to.<br /><b>References : </b></p>
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